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Guided writing: tourism festival awards paragraph

Idée directrice

Session model: 2017 contrôle Writing task 1 — table → 5-line guided paragraph (4 marks). Official criteria on that paper's grid: Efficient use of prompts (2) + Linguistic and mechanical accuracy (2). Body themed to Holidaying / travel / tourism so chapter congruence holds (Academy Awards shape, travel content).

Signature de reconnaissance — l'énoncé se trahit ainsi

guided writing tourism festival awards

holiday travel vacation trip table paragraph

efficient use of prompts

Sujet principal

Writing 1 — guided paragraph about a travel festival (4 marks)

1 questionCorrigé masqué

Writing — Task 1 (guided writing, about 4 marks).

Use the information in the table below to present the Mediterranean Travel Festival Awards in a five-line paragraph.

| | |
|---|---|
| Launch date | 12/06/2010 |
| Description | Annual tourism awards celebrating creative holiday packages |
| Objective | Recognize achievements in sustainable travel and cultural vacation design |
| Main prize | A trophy called the “Silver Compass” |
| Who attends | Tour operators, travel bloggers and families planning a summer trip |

Turn the notes into a short coherent paragraph. Use holiday / tourism / travel vocabulary naturally. Do not add facts that are not in the table.

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Model answer (guided paragraph)

The Mediterranean Travel Festival Awards were launched on 12 June 2010. They are annual tourism awards that celebrate creative holiday packages. Their objective is to recognize achievements in sustainable travel and cultural vacation design. The main prize is a trophy known as the Silver Compass. Tour operators, travel bloggers and families planning a summer trip attend the ceremony.

Assessment criteria (official shape — 2017 contrôle Writing grid)

- Efficient / appropriate use of the prompts — 2 marks: launch date, description, objective, prize and audience all appear without contradiction.
- Linguistic and mechanical accuracy — 2 marks: grammar, vocabulary, spelling and punctuation.

(On free-production tasks the same sessions also print Adherence to task and content adequacy (3), Language (3) and Mechanics of writing (2) — keep those criteria in mind for longer pieces.)

Méthode / Automatismes

List the five cells as five clauses. Join with simple linkers (which, Their objective is, The main prize is). Keep holiday / travel nouns from the table so the paragraph stays on the tourism unit.

Pièges classiques

Do not write a review of a personal vacation. Do not invent prize winners. Five lines, not twelve — this is the guided half of Writing.