Writing 1 — guided paragraph (4 marks)
Writing — Task 1 (guided writing, about 4 marks).
Use the information in the table below to write a four-line paragraph to present the Healthy School Campaign for primary students and their teachers.
| | |
|---|---|
| Foundation | 2015 |
| Organizers | Ministry of Education + Ministry of Health |
| Purpose | Support students' healthy food choices; establish nutrition standards in every school class |
| Target schools | Rural primary schools |
| Learning focus | Classroom workshops where a teacher links nutrition to everyday education |
Write a coherent paragraph that uses all the prompts. Do not invent unrelated facts. Aim for clear school / education vocabulary and accurate language.
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Model answer (guided paragraph)
The Healthy School Campaign was founded in 2015 by the Ministry of Education and the Ministry of Health. Its purpose is to support students' healthy food choices and to establish clear nutrition standards. The campaign targets rural primary schools, where classroom workshops help a teacher link nutrition to everyday education. In this way, learning about food becomes part of school life rather than a separate topic.
Assessment criteria (official shape — 2018 contrôle)
- Content (full and coherent use of the prompts) — 2 marks: all table items appear in a logical order (foundation → organizers → purpose → target → classroom focus).
- Language and mechanics of writing — 2 marks: accurate grammar and vocabulary; spelling, punctuation and capitalisation under control.
A full-credit paragraph is short, complete and free of contradiction with the data.